英文写作——告别中式英语(朱颖)(贵州民族大学) 中国大学mooc慕课答案2024版 m41474

第 1 周 思维与写作 第 1 周 测试

1、 Please choose the right sentences from the following four sentences.

A:Since I get my smart phone, I spend too much time texting my friends, I hardly ever send e-mails anymore.
B:Since I get my smart phone, I hardly ever send e-mails. Instead, I spend too much time texting my friends.
C:Hardly do I email my friends since I get my smart phone.
D: Since I get my smart phone, I don’t e-mail my friend, I spend too much time texting them.
答案: Since I get my smart phone, I hardly ever send e-mails. Instead, I spend too much time texting my friends.;
Hardly do I email my friends since I get my smart phone.

2、 For the sentence”很多家长忙于工作，忽视了与孩子的沟通，这可能会导致孩子出现心理问题。” , which are good translations ?

A:Many parents spend most of their time at work, neglect the interaction with their children, it may lead to children’s psychological problems.
B:Many parents spend most of their time at work and neglecting the interaction with their children, it may lead to psychological problems.
C:Many parents spend most of their time with their work and ignore the interaction with children, which leads to psychological problems with children.
D:If many parents spend most of their time at work and neglect the interaction with their children, children may have psychological problems.
答案: Many parents spend most of their time with their work and ignore the interaction with children, which leads to psychological problems with children.;
If many parents spend most of their time at work and neglect the interaction with their children, children may have psychological problems. 

3、 瑞典哥德堡丢了一个六个月大的婴儿，然后全城警察出动，调用直升机和所有警犬全城搜捕，最后，婴儿在丢失两个小时后找到。In Gothenburg, a six-month-old baby has been lost. Then all the police in the city went out to research her with police dogs and helicopters to help with the search efforts. Finally, the bay girl was found two hours later.The English part is a good translation of the Chinese version.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 错误
分析：在英文中，叙述事情时，我们一般先叙事情的结果，然后再叙述经过。

4、 在暑假，有五周的时间将尝试无网络的生活方式，这令我们忐忑不安。We are uneasy about the 5-week lifestyle experiment of living without internet during the summer holiday.The Enlish part is a good translation of the Chinese version.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 正确
分析：在英文表述中，我们先把表示自己情感，看法的部分表述出来，然后再叙述事件。

第 2 周 准确的用词 第 2 周测试

1、 Which of the following sentences is the best one? （从句子中用词的简洁性和准确性考虑那个句子最好）

A:Solving little problems in the dormitory will add your social experience and help you learn to understand other people’s feelings.
B:Solving trivial problems in the dormitory will enrich your social experience and help you learn to be considerate.
C:Solving little problems in the dormitory will add your social experience and help you learn to understand other people’s feeling
D:Solving trivial problems in the dormitory will enrich your social experience and help you learn to be kind.
答案: Solving trivial problems in the dormitory will enrich your social experience and help you learn to be considerate.

2、 Which of the following sentences is the best one?

A:The science and technology have greatly influenced our lives and our society is changign very rapidly.
B:The science and technology have greatly influenced our lives and our society is changing at an unprecedented speed.
C:The science and technology have greatly influence our lives, as a result, our society is changing at an unprecedented speed.
D:The science and technology have penetrated every corner of our lives, as a result, our society is changing at an unprecedented speed.
答案: The science and technology have penetrated every corner of our lives, as a result, our society is changing at an unprecedented speed.

3、 1) Retirement is something most of us must face sooner or later. 2) Retirement is inevitable.The first sentence above is formal.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 错误

4、 1) The two companies combined together to form one. 2) The two companies merged.The second sentence above is concise.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 正确

5、 1) Lots of job loss is just one thing resulting from automation.2) Widespread unemployment is one consequence of automation.The second sentence is formal.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 正确

6、 During the four years at college, I learned lots of knowledge.The above sentence is right.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 错误
分析：搭配错误，应该是acquire lots of knowledge.

7、 Fill in the blank with a single word according to the meaning of the first sentence. 1) He made the statement that the bargain was needed. 2) He ______ that the bargain was needed.（简化上句中的短语 made the statement）
答案: stated
分析：make the statement 可以简化为stated

8、 Fill in the blank with a single word according to the meaning of the first sentence. 1) It is hard to tell whether the job can be got and how long you have to wait. 2) It is hard to tell whether the job is ______ and how long you have to wait. (用一个形容词表达can be got的意思）
答案: available
分析：”可以得到的“， 我们写作时就想到“can be got”,但是用一个形容词 “be available” 表达更简洁，也更符合书面语。

第 3 周 有效的句子 第 3 周 测试

1、 Please chooose one concise sentence from the following four choices A, B, C and D.

A:The reason why most of the country shifts to daylight savings time is that winter days are much shorter than summer days.
B:There were pine trees that stood like giants.
C:The intention of the company was to expant its workforce.
D:The company proposed to diversify the background and abilities of employees.
答案: The company proposed to diversify the background and abilities of employees.

2、 Please chooose two complete sentences from the following four choices A, B, C and D.

A:Dream of Red Mansion Is the best-known novels.
B:The greatest danger that a species faces in a rapidly coevolving ecosystem.
C:This problem can be effectively solved only in this way.
D:The encouragement from the tutor had a great effect on him that he worked harder.
答案: This problem can be effectively solved only in this way.;
The encouragement from the tutor had a great effect on him that he worked harder.

3、 Please chooose two correct sentences from the following four choices A, B, C and D.

A:The young man walked quickly and with confidence up to the stage.
B:For most drivers who drank alcohol, the risk of causing an accident is doubled.
C:The internet has too much information mislead us.
D:Too much information on the internet misleads us.
答案: For most drivers who drank alcohol, the risk of causing an accident is doubled.;
Too much information on the internet misleads us.

4、 Smith College, which was founded in 1871, is the premier all-women’s college in the United States.可以简化为： Founded in 1871, Smith College is the premier all-women’s college in the United States.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 正确
分析：定语从句通常可以简化为分词短语

第 4 周 段落的结构 第 4 周 测试

1、 Read the sentences and choose one as the best topic sentence.

A:Yesterday I did not have lunch with my coworkers.
B:Yesterday I went to work late.
C:Yesterday was the worst day of my life.
D:Yesterday I had a bad cold.
答案: Yesterday was the worst day of my life.

2、 Read the sentences and choose one as the best topic sentence.

A:Most of the girls in the class get higher grades in English than the boys.
B:Girls are better at languages than boys.
C:Many students like languages very much.
D:Language is difficult.
答案: Girls are better at languages than boys.

3、 Please identify the purpose of the paragraph that follows from the topic sentence. Almost anyone can get a good grade if they follow these instructions.

A:tell steps in a process
B: express an opinion
C:narrate a story
D:describe a topic
答案: tell steps in a process

4、 The following sentence is a topic sentence. Please identify the purpose of the paragraph that follows it. There are three major causes of obesity in children.

A:compare two subjects
B:explain causes/ effects
C:describe a topic
D:tell steps in a process
答案: explain causes/ effects 

5、 Please read the following paragraph and judge which sentence is the topic sentence.1) Regarding the idea of green life, everyone should take their own action to follow the steps as below. 2) Firstly, we should make a change in our careless using of the natural resources like water. 3) What the society should do is to recycle the factories’ sewage to obtain more sustainable water. 4) Meanwhile , as individuals we should close the water when it is not in use. 5) Secondly, we have strong responsibility to perform as a green life advocator to reduce the use of private vehicles but take the bus or bike. 6) Finally, as we are trouble by the fast and hectic modern life, we can choose to live a more self-sufficient life in the rural areas to feel the charm of the nature.

A:sentence 1)
B:sentence 2)
C:Sentence 3)
D:Sentence 6)
答案: sentence 1)

6、 Please read the following paragraph and judge which are supporting sentences.1) In our society, young children are facing many dangers. 2) Threats to the well-being of children and adolescents represent threats to the entire society. 3) Inadequate education, unemployment, and poor health care all impair the development of young people. 4) However, the biggest threat to our young lies in the area of drug abuse— one with the potential to cause widespread harm and serious consequences. 5) Prevention of drug abuse by the young should therefore be society’s number one priority.

A:sentence 1) and 2)
B:sentence 2) and 3)
C:sentence2), 3) and 4)
D:sentence2), 3), 4) and 5)
答案: sentence2), 3), 4) and 5) 

7、 Please read the following paragraph and judge which is the concluding sentence.1) Doing turther study can be troublesome. 2) First, there is the issue of time, which many people simply do not have enough of it. 3) There is also the question of money, for courses are usually expensive. 4) Extra study also causes pressure and worry, especially when assignments fall due.

A:sentence 4)
B:sentence1)
C:sentence 2)
D:no concluding sentence
答案: no concluding sentence

8、 1) A college degree is important. 2) Having a college degree has many positive effects on a person’s life.Sentence 2) is a better topic sentence.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 正确
分析：sentence 1) is too genral as a topic sentence.

9、 1) The internet has changed the way students do research for term papers.2) The internet is changing students’ livesSentence 2) is a better topic sentence.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 错误
分析：sentence 1) is more specific than the second sentence.

10、 1) An English dictionary is the best choice for English learners. 2) Many English learners use dictionaries.Sentence 2) is a better topic sentence.

A:正确
B:错误
答案: 错误
分析：Sentence 2) is a fact instead of an opinion.

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